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Flamey Omega
Posts : 11323 Points : 335141 Join date : 2012-03-07 Age : 24
| Subject: Sunset 3/19/2013, 4:39 pm | |
| "Come child, Mother Day awaits. For it is sunset."
Stars will scatter 'round and 'round As Day takes off her somber crown And shakes her mantle darkly down
Brother Night, Soft and slender Glances down and will remember The darkness before All the glaring lights and sigh
'Why? Why chase me away?' He murmurs 'Come my friends!' He calls to Lady Moon And her band of Stars 'Tonight they will hear!' Playing the beautiful music Again each night Until, His sister rises again
And to her, Joy is bestowed.
She blushes, Setting the blue sky Alight Each morning and evening. The same show.
Night waits, With Lady Moon And her Stars For a small chance To be loved Each sunset
Notes drifted down As I sat next to Grandpa "I can hear them!" He smiled at me. "As do I."
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I don't know why I changed my poetry style. | |
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Darkfang
Posts : 11187 Points : 332700 Join date : 2012-03-11 Age : 27 Location : Tucson
| Subject: Re: Sunset 3/19/2013, 7:13 pm | |
| So, the nighttime has an inferiority complex? | |
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Flamey Omega
Posts : 11323 Points : 335141 Join date : 2012-03-07 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Sunset 3/19/2013, 9:13 pm | |
| ...no? Actually, he just wants to be listened to. | |
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Darkfang
Posts : 11187 Points : 332700 Join date : 2012-03-11 Age : 27 Location : Tucson
| Subject: Re: Sunset 3/19/2013, 9:16 pm | |
| It seems kinda like he's upset that people like his sister better. | |
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Flamey Omega
Posts : 11323 Points : 335141 Join date : 2012-03-07 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Sunset 3/19/2013, 9:19 pm | |
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Darkfang
Posts : 11187 Points : 332700 Join date : 2012-03-11 Age : 27 Location : Tucson
| Subject: Re: Sunset 3/19/2013, 9:23 pm | |
| I really don't care what people think. Maybe if I was someone else I would though. | |
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Flamey Omega
Posts : 11323 Points : 335141 Join date : 2012-03-07 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Sunset 3/19/2013, 9:49 pm | |
| Well, yeah. But still, it's not really nice to be ignored by the most advanced species. | |
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Darkfang
Posts : 11187 Points : 332700 Join date : 2012-03-11 Age : 27 Location : Tucson
| Subject: Re: Sunset 3/19/2013, 9:53 pm | |
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Flamey Omega
Posts : 11323 Points : 335141 Join date : 2012-03-07 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Sunset 3/19/2013, 9:56 pm | |
| And they're chasing him away from the lands he once roamed. | |
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Darkfang
Posts : 11187 Points : 332700 Join date : 2012-03-11 Age : 27 Location : Tucson
| Subject: Re: Sunset 3/19/2013, 10:23 pm | |
| Kinda like that Coldplay song. | |
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Flamey Omega
Posts : 11323 Points : 335141 Join date : 2012-03-07 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Sunset 3/20/2013, 8:04 am | |
| I don't know any Coldplay. | |
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Darkfang
Posts : 11187 Points : 332700 Join date : 2012-03-11 Age : 27 Location : Tucson
| Subject: Re: Sunset 3/20/2013, 7:24 pm | |
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Flamey Omega
Posts : 11323 Points : 335141 Join date : 2012-03-07 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Sunset 3/20/2013, 8:09 pm | |
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